All Comments on 'The Newly Divorced Resort Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
My 2 cents

What a great idea. A place for people to regain their emotional health after a divorce. I went thru one of those and would have loved that place you write about. I liked the characters you have created. I like the way he is slowly waking up to the people around him. We all take people and places for granted. I look forward to the next chapter and the experiences he will be exposed to. Thanks for your time and imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Tiffany?

She doesn’t add anything to the story.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 4 years ago

Tended to wander off in Walter Mitty dreams. Lost the plot too often. Tad boring.

beach_bouybeach_bouyover 4 years ago
Great start.

Nice beginning to the story. Looking forward to reading the others.

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