All Comments on 'The Next Morning - The Prequel'

Cuck shit.

1/5

What a pathetic excuse for a man. Fucking really.

Prequel of a shitty storm is always a fart with shit! 1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)

1 star without reading

Well I'll never bother with another of your wimpy cuck tales. Grow a pair.

Read the first part, could not stop mentally puking over who these people are. The boorish brute who imposed himself into their lives and the husband and wife facilitating the brute. Everyone in this story holds blame, more so the couple who has no respect for themselves or their marriage. This story is an analogy of the direction the world is going. It shows an expanding lack of respect for self or others. Disregard for traditional values. The taking of things from others that one does not have a right to. A weakness of will to stand up for what is right. SexyblondewifeFL, thanks...for nothing.

Kinda bad, wife devilves into a drunk frat girl for no apparent readon

So poor, it almost defies comment

Ooooohhhh looky another a illumicuckie and an ALPHA MALE.

How do we keep getting the same 15-20 shitty writers hoping that by using a new name their steaming pile of yesterdays Budweiser runs will make them infinitely better?

Go play with your anal hook or find that big cock alpha dude that you really want to bang you and have fun but stop thinking you can actually produce anything that doesnt require the use of internet TP after reading it.

Well written and real. We all imagine these situations and they actually are usually awkward. Neither the emotions nor the interactions, especially between the guys never really go as smoothly as written in these stories. Good job of making it real.

As usual, the Anons and others that don't like the subject matter bitch and complain and score low these stories despite the quality of the work. 5* in part to offset them.

You write a good story, although cuck elements creep into the narrative, they serve to inflame and add drama.

Hey Prince! "We" who? I imagine all three of them sharing an incurable STD as an object lesson to other morons. Maybe HPV so she can get cancer in her 50's with sky high medical bills so that he pays for her painful death for the rest of his life. Now there's a story "we" would all read.

Aurora if it's a sharing / cick tale do yourself and the readers a favor and put that in the tags. Tia

If you like sharing the wife stories, you'll like this one. Well done.

The subject matter is not for me, to put it mildly, but this is good writing. If there are to be further installments, perhaps you could develop the repercussions of a married couple inviting random drunken louts into their bed. You have the writing chops to write compelling drama -- and the LW category is, at heart, a venue for drama. What you've written so far isn't drama, it's a vividly realized fetish vignette.

I thought thi was great. I hope I don't have to wait another two years for the third installment.,. 5/5

A former coworker did something similar in a drunken state with his wife and a guy that lived two floors up from them in the condo complex. They had alway talked dirty during sex and watched porn while they fucked but he never wanted to let her cheat in real life. We’ll his marriage was in tact but officially destroyed. This younger bigger neighbor with a longer and much thicker cock on two viagra pummeled his wife’s pussy, mouth and ass through the rest of the night until they passed out . A mid morning really hung over wife woke up to hubby sitting on the floor devestated with sore holes and dried Cum on her . She just cried knowing what the aftermath damage was now sober. The guy woke up oblivious and went for her pussy but she jumped up saying it was a really bad drunk mistake. He did say sorry and while dressing said hope to do this again I’ll pop by later to talk. There daily fights continued, he always asked if she fucked him while he was working and she would go nuts . Trust and love demolished. They sold there unit and he did find out the guy would ask to fuck again , she never admitted to it but he caught them once laughing together on a beach in back of the complex sitting area. They moved an hour away . He hated it all especially the commute. As far as I know they stayed together. He eventually found a job closer to home but he was never the same . I know he started to fuck around on her as well. He said at the time there sex life was getting bad . The first few months he would lose it half into it then would start with the I know you want his bigger dick anyway stuff and it was killing him mentally and her as well. Fun for fiction but his version is the real don’t try this at home , you don’t know what it will do to your marriage. Many fall into the trap away on vacation with a stranger but I could never drunk or not. Way to jealous for that

Sexy blonde whore is probably a refugee from New Jersey.

Yep a the cuck needs its money otherwise its not worth it. Why else would a man become a cuck and pimp to a whore/skank?