All Comments on 'The Next Playboy Ch. 01'

by ayowai

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youjizz123youjizz123almost 3 years ago

I enjoyed it and curious to see how it goes. I do feel bad for Frank though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Sorry, but you lost me when your protagonist made a website to illicitly post nude photos of a woman. You're right, it's not revenge porn -- it's worse. At least with revenge porn, there's a reason, as vile as it is. Your protagonist did it "cuz it's fun!". If the rest of your story is based on that level of decency, and it's most definitely not worth reading.

Sadly, my eyes did see some of the tripe on the second page while I was scrolling down to this section, which confirmed my suspicion about how bad this story is going to be. The woman of whom they illictly posted nude photos online thought "they violated my privacy, so I'll suck their dicks as payback"? Suspension of disbelief goes only so far.

And by the way, you clearly have no clue how ad revenue works if you think 12,000 page views will generate hundreds of dollars, which was yet another detracting point.

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