All Comments on 'The Next Room, Next Night'

Jumped back to next room to get start. Great, looking forward to next part!!!!!

Good story, very hot, wicked and written with a lot of flavor. I liked how you fleshed out the dominance aspect of the first story and I find all the female characters to be very engaging. The scene in the club where he fingers the stripper struck me as being written particularly hot. (and I'm eager to see those strippers return in the next installment, BTW) The only problem I saw with the story was that it could use a little editing. There was some repetition here and there that could have been trimmed back. I'm really looking forward to the next part, I always enjoy your stuff.