All Comments on 'The Night Porter'

Didn't understand it. Was page 2 left off by accident?

Sorry Curly, but this is not a good story. It doesn’t flow for the reader who is left wondering if he’s fallen into an adolescent’s notebook. What made you think it was a good idea to let her go to his room while he ate steak in the dining room? Can you really imagine that happening? You clearly have ideas, but little idea of how to put them together to make a story. If you can find a Lit editor to work with you, that might work, but obviously after 13 attempts, you’re not going to be able to do it on your own. I do hope you keep writing, but you need a little advice.