All Comments on 'The Noisy Neighbour'

by PaulaApril

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please add an interracial tag, so no one is taken by surprise.

ActingupActingup8 months ago

Quite a marathon, but I enjoyed it, including all the interracial, magic, and other fantastical elements. I laughed at how the younger black man with the big dick turned out to be the lifetime partner rather than the bit on the side. You’ve written a long fantasy fuck with the daughter pulling all the strings and a happy ending for all. Over in Loving Wives, Jim is a bitter and broken man, with his new partner long gone, but stuff him.

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Amateur author of erotica. My stories are sometimes an outlet for my deviant or bi-curious thoughts that I'm too nervous to try in real life. May be one day. Some collections and longer works are available on Amazon Kindle for anyone who wants to add my work to their library.