All Comments on 'The Norseman Ch. 03'

Firstly, I want to say this story is good.

Secondly, something is dead wrong here.

This is my first time reading your stories and your first two chapters were equally good and lots of good reviews. What I can't understand is 'WHAT THE HELL!!!" Why are your stories also below the 4.50 mark??? It boggles my mind.

Did no one feed the trolls? That they started to come out and play havoc? Think I need to find my troll bat or could someone hand me one.

Good work Clarabella!!! Hope to see more of it.

I like what you've done here, leading us into Gellir's life and showing the connection between everyone. This story is great! Please keep writing!

but I'm betting with some thought and dialogue you could make this much better. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I liked and would like to read more!

The first two chapters are good, but I feel like you're really developing the characters some now and because of that, the sex is just getting better! :)

I hope he keeps her!