All Comments on 'The Not-So-Glittery Vampire'

by DinaDevereux

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chris_brownchris_brownover 10 years ago
Great job

This is certainly worthy of a second chapter

DocCISDocCISover 10 years ago
Well done!

A couple mistakes, but well worth the read and a 5!

You changed the POV towards the end in one sentence as well as one typo, but again, great job!

lucianloverlucianloverover 10 years ago
Hehe.....

Freaking hilarious!!! This reminds me of another vampire story involving period sex and tampons!!

I think it was called Tampyre or so.

rogue120rogue120over 10 years ago
A Good Read!

A good read! Loved the story line. It was quirky and funny and fun to read! I hope to see another chapter!! Thank you for sharing!

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxover 10 years ago

Sheeee's back! And dope as ever!

THIS BLEEDS FOR A CHAPTER TWO!!!!

DinaDevereuxDinaDevereuxover 10 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you all for your comments, suggestions, and votes! I'm thinking about another chapter or two... We'll see!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Another Chapter please!

I LOVED THIS!!! PLEASE DONT END IT HERE! ANOTHER CHAPTER :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Why…

Why did you end it there I want more D:

cindyp1976cindyp1976over 4 years ago
I really liked it

I really liked this story even with the period sex and think you should make it a series it was really great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Yes, yes, yes to the period blood + turnon reference! I never see that. Loved it! Women smell n taste amazing while menstrating. It's really undervalued in media. Thanks for making her a full figured curvy woman. Same idea with feminine beauty connection. Please keep writing this subject. 5 stars.

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