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The wedding procession started, and Lisa walked out to take her dad's arm. "Well daddy we made it," Lisa said feeling her eye watering.

"You look beautiful baby," he said having difficult to speak. They had become so much closer since the bad Novel came out. They had all settled out of court with the publishing company for more money than Robert had ever imagined having. Along with his trust fun, sale of the shore house and retirement payout he managed to get away from the negative press for being a 30+ year cuckold. Sure, he ran away and purchased a 7000 sq. ft summer home in Aruba and a 50-foot sailboat docked by his private dock.

He was lost in his thoughts and was elbowed by his daughter. "Dad its time to give me away."

"Do I have too?"

She giggled, "Yes but since Luke and I are moving in with you, I'm not going far."

Robert was waiting for the bride's entry music to begin. "Roseann came back, and we talked a little."

Lisa had forgiven her mother recently because she was a great mom. She knew about the donation of the millions her mom made to charity and how remorseful she's been for what she did to her daddy. Still, this was the first time he had referred to her something other than Maxine.

When they got to the alter the priest asked, "who gives this woman to be wed?"

Robert glanced over at Roseann sitting on the end of row two. "Her mother and I," he leaned over and when she lifted her vail he kissed her cheek.

He walked towards the first row and saw his new love sitting in her clinging beige dress. Sure, she was 20 years younger than he was, but he tells everyone that she is mature for her age. Alisa was his Real Estate agent that found his house when he moved here. She was a widow with a twelve-year-old son who Robert fell in love with.

It really hurt Roseann to see her ex with a hot beautiful woman, but it also made her feel better knowing that he has continued living. She was still rich enough to afford a home in North Jersey and was now looking for one here in Aruba. She knew it was over between Robert and her but didn't want to lose what little she still had with her daughter. Plus, the island was small enough that maybe she could be around him somewhat. A few men tried to get her into a serious relationship, but most knew about the slut she was from her book and wanted in on the action. The rest she compared to Robert, and they didn't make the grade. Suddenly random sex wasn't that great for her, so she started cooking and soon started writing cookbooks. Her first cookbook was titled:

"THE EATTERS CONFESSION."

Fin

Ending note: I hope you like the read. Thanks for your support. Slick742

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72 Comments
26thNC26thNC5 days ago

Great story. Cheating bitch always had excuses, but she had been a whore since college. Another detestable LW cheating bitch.

AllNigherAllNigher5 days ago

The book describes the life of a wife leading two lives. One a devoted loving wife and the second a cheating lying slut.

No she didn't. She lived the double life of a lovey dovy cheating lying slut with her husband, and an honest cheating slut with her lovers.

Oatmeal1969Oatmeal196920 days ago

I guess you could have squeezed more out of the story that was there, but I thoroughly enjoyed the drama. I think it should be rated a point or two higher.

SatyrDickSatyrDick26 days ago

[21.05.24]

Top Shelf!

11/10!!!!!

LechemanLechemanabout 2 months ago

I'm still attempting to get my head around understanding how the MC must have felt learning the truth - Wow!

ViolentKnightViolentKnightabout 2 months ago

A lie of omission is still a lie. If Ken had told him the truth, he wouldn't have to marry that god-awful woman.

5 stars for a brilliantly written story.

DazzyDDazzyD4 months ago

This is a 10 on a 5 scale!

Waldteufel61Waldteufel614 months ago

Like the originality of the story, feel after all this time some edits to clean it up would’ve been nice to see on 2d reading.

KenfromIndyKenfromIndy8 months ago

Well done!!! Good story time! Worth the time to read and I was highly entertained. Well created characters, story and dialogue, how it should be done.

Please do keep writing and I will keep reading.

XluckyleeXluckylee8 months ago

This is how you write a story. 5 stars from Xluckylee

Ganymede69Ganymede698 months ago

After all she did she should’ve giving all the money to her husband and daughter.

oldmanbill69oldmanbill698 months ago

Sad tale of the usual!

WhyjustwhyWhyjustwhy8 months ago

The premise wasn't bad, like the title of the book. But the title question was all too obvious and answered within the first few paragraphs. And did she really have to be the mega slut? I mean, she hit every cliche possible. Random sex with many guys, brother in law, gangbang, and of course had to be some BBC. But the biggest cliche is after all her fuck fests, she dares to make the claim of loving only him, bullshit. Too much over the top. Written well but the guts are just too much.

OOAAOOAA8 months ago

Good story! Well written!

leofric35leofric358 months ago

Liked it. Really enjoyable read well pulled together and a good ending. Thanks

EdgeOfSundownEdgeOfSundown8 months ago

Despite the author's warning about universes, no real self respecting husband would put up with this bullshit. Much less even be civilized to the slut years down the road.

This was a cliche fest for the betas out there. I wish I could say I'm surprised by how many responses that the simp boys made about this, it's like they want to shame men for having testicular fortitude and self respect.

Poor upbringing of their part I guess....

jflindersjflinders8 months ago

Ok, I know the author said it is his own world, but I really dislike the tendency on LW to make up causes of action to make it so that characters in the book can get millions of dollars with no cause of action at all.

Here the thought that the daughter has a cause of action is unthinkable. The husband has no contract with the publisher so if the writer actually had final say then it is her that has the action for breach of contract, not him. @knoxhard has suggested libel, which only applies if facts are untrue so has no application here, as well as breach of privacy. There's nobody taking pictures or recordings of him when they shouldn't, just the telling of a story actually written by the book's main character-there's no actionable breach of privacy here.

It would be nice to live in a world where someone has to pay you millions when you aren't entitled to it. The author is certainly entitled to write stories where the legal system is totally fictitious, but I prefer stories where there is some relation of the environment to that which we live in. Perhaps that is why I don't enjoy fantasy books.

Tim_the_cajunTim_the_cajun8 months ago

Great story well written. Thanks.

JoeBetterBNiceJoeBetterBNice8 months ago

I found it to be well written and enjoyable. Your intro said this was not going to be a BTB story (the revenge part is never that important to me), but I feared that meant Robert was going to reconcile w/ Roseann. And then, you just kept piling on how much she cheated, and even trotted out the "but I really love you" excuse, which I never understand. So, I was pleased to see the couple did not reconcile. I am fine w/ her losing the security of the man who made her feel loved (b/c as written, that is what her feelings sounded like), and having few other consequences. You entertained me, and what more can one ask from a writer?

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