All Comments on 'The Nude Beach Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Looking forward to the follow-up to this. Hopefully some action for Isabelle, and Kate joining the fun.

Lonely32Lonely32over 2 years ago

👍🏞I would like to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is a nice one. Low key and (vaguely) plausible. Like a lot of your stories, I think it needs more denouement -- it ends too suddenly. It's almost like the writer gets off and loses interest when the character does.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Will you continue with this story?

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