All Comments on 'The Nude Beach Pt. 01'

anticipation is half the pleasure

Are there really that many couples who go to nude beaches and then fuck others present? Stories like this belong in the sci-fi fantasy section.

Loved it.

-26thNC Approved

I loved your last work so I am very much looking forward to this. You really know how to build things up and deliver good pay off!

I think I missed the part where it was explained that they share, swap, or always planned something like a MMF. I mean that is where this is going, right?

Very well presented and written this scenario happens all over the world!! My wife and I have had many escapades of this type intentional and accidentally thank you for reliving those times so long ago now over 20 years

I can already see this story telegraphing into his wife having sex with "Brady" and him knocking her up. Sorry Ben, but your wife isn't going to have your kids.

Classic storytelling by one person - solo narrative - can be easy or difficult to follow by the reader. But a narrative story with three narrators is very difficult for anyone to follow; particularly with 'assigned parts'. Sorry but I lost interest once I confused which narrator was speaking, telling the story. Suggest you make your format simpler.

This works well enough and could easily expand into 10K words or even a novel.

So hot. Can not wait to read more. This is one of my fantasies as well and would love for my wife and I to be in this situation.

****Nice start looking forward to future submissions. Thanks for sharing.