All Comments on 'The Nude Gun Ch. 08'

Keep at it!

I must admit that I am really enjoying the series. Although an editor would improve the overall flow and probably catch the small grammatical errors, I don't think any of it detracts significantly from the the story. 5+ Stars.

More please

5+

Always enjoy your stories! It is good to see a female get to have fun with the "Nude Gun", it opens up the story a lot. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Kydo

Great story keep it up!

Five stars. literotica needs more good transfomation storys

I am totally enjoying this story and can't wait to see what will happen. One suggestion is that you seem pretty focused on women with large breasts and bald pussys. Can we vary it a bit? Just wondering. Please keep the story going!

I absolutely love this story. However, does EVERY woman need to have big tits?

No.

Sorry my bias. I am trying to vary it. I guess that can become a little boring.

Thanks for the feedback.

I really like how this chapter developed, with the Scott and Ramona stories adding a new dimension (pardon the pun). Particularly looking forward to how the new Amazon makes out as a recruit.

DON'T WRITE ANY MORE...SICK...

GARBAGE

Big Tits-No Problem for me! Bald vaginas? Cute, but a Brazilian Landing strip? Haha. Now you made it real for me! Many women I have been with will NOT shave completely but they will go for a "Landing Strip" look. Shaven looks too immature for them, but I like it. Again, I favor BIG TITS, so that isn't offensive for me but you will lose me if the ray gun ends up giving out "A" or "B" cup breasts. I mean, THIS is supposed to be fantasy so why not make them all Voluptuous, Amazon women with Big breasts? I have had them all and I favor Short, Voluptuous women with Large breasts who love to have them touched, massaged or sucked on for long periods of time. After all, who wants a women without needs of her own? Loving this So far!

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!