All Comments on 'The Nut Parlor'

Interesting scene. Well written. Not overly erotic

I don't often comment but felt that for thisstory I should. Although I only rated it average that is a reflection of the the theme and my own preferences. This story though is well written, grammar and spelling do not annoy as they are correct and if the author wrote another story with a different theme I would be keen to read it so please Bobby, do write more.

I like it. I wish it was a little bit longer. I wish more people wrote about orc women. I find them the most erotic out of monster girl races.

For a first story its excellent!

But try expanding it.

Expand the erotic elements, develop more of the story.

Hope you continue writing! ;)