All Comments on 'The Ocean'

Did I miss something here. This. Lousy piece of writing is under Exhibitionist/voyeur but all I read was some pitiful excuse for a semi romance. Horrible grammar/spelling. I've gotten more aroused looking at. VS catalog. Iris71217 if this your idea of a sex story I really feel sorry for whomever (if) you're involved with. BARF

There are several typos and grammar issues for sure, but the story just moved from 0-60 with no real buildup and when did he get his pants off (or zipper open)?

Please try again and make use of an editor.

Terrible butchery of the English language and short, uninspiring sex scene.