All Comments on 'The Odd Apocalypse of Luxertown Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
The end made no sense

Not saying it was a horrible story, to be honest not a fart fetish guy, but the end was lame. There was no explanation or who it was or what the explosion was. It was sex with no story at this point. Sorry to criticize. The sex scene was pretty good.

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