All Comments on 'The Office Boy Ch. 01'

If this is the extent of your writing then give up and find something that you are good at. Try fishing or playing golf or maybe knitting. but forget writing.

Cause as a writer you can't cut it.

This has to be one of the worst pieces if crap ever posted on this site. and that is saying something!.

Go back to making models or collecting stamps. Because you are one sorry fuck in every other aspect of life.

I tried hard but could not make it past one and a half pages.

Pretty good. Not real world but a fantasy I would love.