All Comments on 'The Office Boy Ch. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Love It

Keep it going this is new to me and I like this story very much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Ummm sorry

yea i likes the story in the beggining fantastic plot, most of the stories here are sex and then the end, this was a good change. however i did not like the fact that the husband was chastisied further, i would have liked it more if he was realeased and Kats 'women rule the world' point of view would end with the birth of her child, regardless of gender. even with their child born they should have still

had femdom activites, just noe chastising, not my cuppa, to me it could have been better. but ill just think of it my way in my head

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
bloody brillant!!!

very very very good

exellent job keep it up! :p

MasochisticFreakMasochisticFreakover 14 years ago
Amazing and deep

This was an amazing story. I'm amazed, it actually had a story line instead of the meaningless erotica I usually see. Thank you for this amazing story!

WhiteLotus2011WhiteLotus2011about 13 years ago
Decent

I thought this story was good in the beginning, but as time passed, the characters stayed flat. Katrina probably should have given up the whole "Women are superior" line, when she got married. And Steven wasn't the most interesting character himself.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
good work! xx

I adored this story its nice when things have a storyline as well as.getting hot in parts. Just I feel when the baby was born Steven and kats dom/slave relationship should have calmed down In the chastity area maybe just when kat is away have Steven chastised but all other times no and there should have been at least one moment where Steven wasn't restrained in sex and he could finally ravage mistress. Other than that amazing story xx

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Excellent Story

One of my favourite stories have read all ten chapters twice now. Loved all of the charactors. Steven certainly went through it all but what dedicated and loyal submissive would not! Wish the author would write more.

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