by Aussie Worm
yea i likes the story in the beggining fantastic plot, most of the stories here are sex and then the end, this was a good change. however i did not like the fact that the husband was chastisied further, i would have liked it more if he was realeased and Kats 'women rule the world' point of view would end with the birth of her child, regardless of gender. even with their child born they should have still
had femdom activites, just noe chastising, not my cuppa, to me it could have been better. but ill just think of it my way in my head
This was an amazing story. I'm amazed, it actually had a story line instead of the meaningless erotica I usually see. Thank you for this amazing story!
I thought this story was good in the beginning, but as time passed, the characters stayed flat. Katrina probably should have given up the whole "Women are superior" line, when she got married. And Steven wasn't the most interesting character himself.
I adored this story its nice when things have a storyline as well as.getting hot in parts. Just I feel when the baby was born Steven and kats dom/slave relationship should have calmed down In the chastity area maybe just when kat is away have Steven chastised but all other times no and there should have been at least one moment where Steven wasn't restrained in sex and he could finally ravage mistress. Other than that amazing story xx
One of my favourite stories have read all ten chapters twice now. Loved all of the charactors. Steven certainly went through it all but what dedicated and loyal submissive would not! Wish the author would write more.