All Comments on 'The Office Ch. 01'

Hot!

Very hot! My only real advice would be to add some kind of marking to indicate a dialogue is taking place. The text messages were a bit confusing as to origin. Otherwise, very hot chapter!

I found this story so hot. Went to vote 5 stars and the phone screwed up and gave it 1. Sorry.

The story starts with a female POV ("Every time I see you my eyes are immediately drawn to that thick bulge I see outlined by your pants.") but then switches to a male POV ("I'm so hard. I'd love to be buried balls deep in your tight cunt."). I suddenly didn't know who was speaking.

One Sexy story.

What's so sexy about "The Office" is that it feels like an encounter that could have taken place (and probably does every day). You build slowly, slutforuse, and bring us to a hot climax!