All Comments on 'The Office Team-Building Day Ch. 03'

by thewhitestripe

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
good story

but would be better if he came inside the women, and they are not on birth control.

werewolfguy84werewolfguy84over 12 years ago
great job!

love what your doin with the story. keep up the great work!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Improving...

Each story gets better and better... keep up the good work!

playtime999playtime999over 10 years ago
rising heat

great build up; the captivity and the camera add to the delight. really good writing.

Will6969doWill6969doover 9 years ago
You have

My attention! And, my cum juice as well!

JohnSpiritWolfJohnSpiritWolfalmost 9 years ago
Turn Abouts Fair Play...

They should get Carmen in a compromising position though as well, maybe hide a cam in her office. This way they don't have to worry about their jobs. :)

gpetagpetaalmost 4 years ago

ooo yes this office is woth to be visited

Marklynda2Marklynda26 months ago

Always glad when the boss is on board with the new office dynamics. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

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