All Comments on 'The Office Team-Building Day Ch. 16'

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Lust_of_dragonLust_of_dragonalmost 8 years ago
Fantastic!

We got drama, a twist and a very nice threesome with some gorgeous asian women. Your stories never fail to get me off and your writing is excellent! Cannot wait for the next installment. A sexy story with an interesting plot? I'm in heaven right now

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Always Waiting

I wait months and months for the next chapter of each of your stories just to be initially let down by a measly 3 pages, but after reading them I'm never disappointed. Just promise you will finish all of your stories, no matter how long it takes!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Thank you!

Finally another chapter. Awesome as always. Please keep them coming!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
very good story - and than some

thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great!

Is a follow up coming of it? These are really great stories!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Amazing - please don't make us wait too long for the next instalment

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Continuation

When's the next chapter coming

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Waiting for next

Hope the next one comes soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great

Great chapter please don't make us wait too long for the next one

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great series, but...

this is a terrible way to end it. Need to resolve all the issues still left hanging!!?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Any hope?

It looks like it’s been quite some time. Here’s to hoping there’s a conclusion to this one.

argeelogargeelogalmost 4 years ago
Sorry

I am really sorry that I stuck with you through 16 chapters only to be left high and dry. If you can't finish it, you shouldn't start it. I accidently hit 4 stars but would like to go back and make it 1 star because of the incompletion. Shame on you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Just realised I never told you how much I enjoyed this series. It's a shame you ran out of steam, but I get that's just how it is sometimes. Thanks for sharing!

JohnnyRebBBJohnnyRebBBalmost 2 years ago

I really hate investing time in a great story to have it stop unfinished.

Hence the score

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I did a word count on your office training day and Emma series. Do you know you've written more words than Shakespeare's complete works?! It's true. Much like Shakespeare, some stories are incomplete or presumed lost, but that doesn't affect the canon.

If you're alive and in a good position to write again, please consider writing more. Not just to finish the storylines but writing in general.

QuoxQuoxabout 1 year ago
Love to see how it ends!

Where’s the rest, Champion? We’d love to see how it all ends! Maybe Nat and Bella can “kiss and make up?”

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

A waste of time

No resolution

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