All Comments on 'The Offspring of Fenrir Ch. 01'

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paulthewetcdpaulthewetcdabout 4 years ago
"I won't ever do it again...not without you"

Oh, Mommy! What a story!

Thank you for this sensual erotic adventure......

Beautifully arousing.....

Looking forward too reading more about this family and their rituals.....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Nice story

Your words create a vivid image and makes the reader feel like they are part of your story !

Well Done !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Such a use of language! Not my usual read but arousing

Familyluv2114uFamilyluv2114uover 3 years ago
Ohh My......

So amazingly written!!

Please continue with this series Mistress,I just had one intense orgasm after reading this.....My mouth is salivating and I’m starting to harden up again in anticipation after reading your last words.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Great work

Love this first chapter, and I definitely hope you'll continue

hudson_dehudson_deabout 2 years ago

i love this story, you have a wonderful writing style

subleonardosubleonardoabout 2 years ago

Very hot story. i look foward for Part2 and also 3, 4 (future pegging or Mom asking son to do oral to Her or Dad would be very hot)

The_Space_BetweenThe_Space_Betweenalmost 2 years ago

I enjoy the very nurturing nature of all this. Obviously, the sexual acts in and of themselves are incredibly intoxicating, but the focus on it being her touch, and her desire to help take care of him is what truly drives home. Thank you for your writing!

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Occupation: Mommy Domme, Writer, RPer, and Conversationalist Define "Mommy Domme" A Mommy Domme is a more nurturing type of Domme. Caring, Understanding, Non-Judgemental, Open-Minded, Trustworthy, Maternal, Strict but Sensual. I prefer to be called "Mommy" by my subs. This ...

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