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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
ok

its a good start id like to see some more graphic sex. and more ohysical descriptions. a place like that can have so many stories.

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New member as of 4/10/06. I am typically very busy but enjoy reading the stories on the site. I have always wanted to write and am going to give it a try. It might take a while but I think that with my overactive imagination I might get something passable out. Check back...

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