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Click hereA month later, Hobbs got a call from Bethlehem PD informing him that Mrs. Markle's car was found abandoned in Philadelphia, and the case got moved into the unsolved case file.
Chapter 17
Saturday, October 31, 2015
Jackson stood in front of his bathroom mirror, getting ready for his date with Tracy Johnson. He just wondered how ready Tracy Johnson would be for her last night out.
In recent years he seemed to be spending more time looking at his reflection. The accident at Yucca Flat was sixty-two years ago, but Jackson looks exactly the same as he did when he was still Michael Bliss. Sometimes he wondered if he would ever grow old. "Fuck it; I'm going to live forever," Jackson said out loud, and laughed.
This time Margo left in September, but instead of making Jackson look for her, she came to him. In Reading, looking at a Mustang he was thinking of buying, Jackson heard someone speaking to him. "What did you say?" Jackson said as he turned to see who was talking. She was tall, blond and blue-eyed.
"I was asking you if you were going to buy this car." She said.
Jackson saw her wedding ring and said, "I was thinking about it, Mrs. ..."
"Johnson, Tracy Johnson."
"Nice to meet you, Tracy. I'm Michael. Can I ask you why you care if I buy this car?"
"Oh, I don't care, I just think you would look good in it."
"If I buy it, will you go for a ride with me?"
"Buy the car and then ask me."
Jackson bought the Mustang, and Tracy Johnson went for a ride with him. When he brought he back to the car dealership, he asked Tracy to go out with him on Halloween.
"I'm a married woman; it wouldn't be proper for me to go on a date with you."
"Oh, come on. You know you want to; just say yes, and I promise you a night you won't forget."
Tracy leaned against Jackson and kissed him on the cheek and said, "I will be in Allentown at the Marriott with some friends on Halloween. Why don't you meet me there?"
Jackson walked into the Marriott at ten o'clock on Halloween, found Tracy in the bar, and talked her into following him home. He showed Tracy around the house and even told her about the hidden tunnel and the dead bounty hunters inside.
"Can I see the tunnel?" Tracy asked.
"Sure, after I show you my bedroom," Jackson said.
He wasn't worried about telling Tracy about the tunnel because that is where she would be spending eternity.
Jackson had stopped feeling guilty about what he was doing after the third time. He blamed Margo for making him kill these women. If she would just stay in the tunnel where she belonged, he would not have to find her and bring her back.
He took Tracy to the bedroom and made slow passionate love to her, and then strangled her. He lovingly placed Tracy's body in the tunnel with the eight other women he had killed.
End of Part 1
- COMMENTS
JTassabout 2 months agoIt's a good start.
I'm having a bit of a tough time feeling any empathy for the main character. He's not very likeable and doesn't seem to have much personality.
NVDiceGuyalmost 3 years agoVery slow starting and felt discombobulated.
But letting it developed it now has me wrapped up to get to Chapter 2. From comments it sounds well worth it.
dgfergiealmost 3 years agoVery interesting story with plotting to killing someone so drug companies could make more money. Not far from the truth. They were doing radiation experiments here in Washington on children way back when, in 50s I think it was. Good story on to part two.
tralan69erover 3 years agoA really good story. I've read Ch.2 and came back to give a score for the story. 5 *****
Some of the commenters with their big words and snide comments you would think that they at least have one story to show for their arrogance.
@lujon2019, do you ever READ the story or do you comment the first thing that comes to your mind without knowing the facts?
Wargamerover 3 years agoFinished this wonderful yarn, gave my kudos at the end of Part 2.
Came back here to readjust my 4/5 score to 5/5. Well worth it.
lukeshortover 3 years agoI read part 2 before commenting. This and part 2 make a really good story. 5*
LordSlamdawggover 3 years agoDorian Gray Morphed into Hannibal Gets Telltale Heart(s) meets Vertigo ( cubed ) ... If K.K. was at a bar drinking and boozily sharing this story as an anecdote, I'd confiscate his car keys, call an Uber and tell him to sleep it off. But Literotica is indeed the forum to let your literary brainchildren loose for review and submitted to the tender mercies of the reading public.
As for my opinion? There are multiple interesting ideas at play but they are oh so jumbled and uncoordinated .Give your story two Ritalins and reedit with narrowed focus in the morning.
dob092095over 3 years agoGreat story but no way does this belong in loving wives. I’m looking forward to the next installments.
Anonymousover 3 years agoA pity ve lost ze damn wor.
Imagine vat great experiments ve could have made in ze desert of Arizona vit ze wor prisoners. Wunderbar.
Hei...l, aaaa , nevar mind.
Anonymousover 3 years agoThis is a murder mystery at best, and maybe Science Fiction/Fantasy story. The plot revolves around a metabolic or biochemical anomaly associated with nuclear blast radiation and exposure to unknown chemical reactions. What has that got to do with adultery, romance, wife sharing, or any other Loving Wives plot? Hell, it even includes ghosts or evil spirits.
What's worse, its become tedious and boring. At this point I couldn't care less how many women he kills or if he ever gets caught. The guy is a psycho and won't serve any prison time anyway.
Still, thanks for the effort.
Anonymousover 3 years agoAbbreviation for staff sergeant is SSG. SFC is sergeant first class.
Wargamerover 3 years agoA psychotic serial killer haunted by his sick and twisted mind. This can only end one way.
Good story thus far, scores 4/5 because it was not complete.
Demosthenes384bcover 3 years agoGood story - He seems to revert from Jackson to Michael a couple times. Is that on purpose or editing slip? Definitely a new plot twist for this genre. Not sure I like it, but definitely 5*!
johsunover 3 years agoOK, Yes, I like this story, a lot. But as Pam Poovey would say, Holy Shitsnacks! Never read a story with a serial killer as the main character. It's very well done. I keep asking myself ... is he just nuts and the voice is just in his addled brain? Or did the chemicals that are keeping him young also make him sensitive to voices from 'beyond'? Or ....
Que chills and shivering up and down my spine.
Great story will be waiting and hoping for an equally well written continuation. Thank you for this story.
