All Comments on 'The Old Man & The Queen Ch. 02'
by SteamyEncounters
- 16 Comments
Anonymousover 6 years agoI'll admit, I was a bit worried about the update. 2 weeks between the chapter may not be a big deal to many, but I lack patience.
This chapter had everything I wanted. Keep writing !
Anonymousover 6 years agoKEEP UP THE COMPLETE STORY LINE IT IS STARTING TO READ LIKE A BOOK CAN NOT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER.
Anonymousover 6 years agoIt's clear that you've put a lot of effort into the world. Waiting for the sexy times to begin.
Anonymousover 6 years agoNo sex, yet it felt very erotic. I'm curious, do you have any real life inspiration for Elena ?
SteamyEncountersover 6 years agoAuthorAnonymous, yes I do have a real life reference (ironically a blend of two), but I try not to make those references and allow my descriptions to help the reader form their own vision of the characters. Hope that helps.
Anonymousover 6 years agoI liked the story.
The action picked up nicely into a depraved public show of discipline that, while I would have preferred it be handled slightly different, delivered just enough to want for more in the next chapter.
Anonymousover 6 years agoI imagine Jordan Carver or Lucy pinder. They're pretty busty, especially Jordan.
Anonymousover 6 years agoCan't wait for old Harry to fuck the queen into oblivion. Hopefully the next chapter will be out in a week.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoDon't understand why this series stopped. It was just hitting its stride.
Anonymousover 1 year agoI enjoyed the description of Elena... Her personality as well as her figure... However the public humiliation went too far... Especially for somebody such as Elena... Would've preferred her becoming resistant at the geyser's home
