All Comments on 'The Old Slave'

A sublime fantasy!

It is a lovely story. Quite sweet actually. Well written. I personally would have preferred more whips, bondage and protocol Femdom costume.

Unusual premise.

But every sexual encounter is rushed. Lacks needed details.

It's as if mentioning an act is all that is necessary.

Not!

Three stars.

Good job!

Reading this story, as a submissive woman, really captured the internal desire a true submissive has to serve his/her Master/Mistress. Your story also demonstrates the balance that is needed in a D/s relationship in the real world. Lovely. Thank you!

I’ve read stories on Literotica for years and never commented because until now I had not found a story that moved me as much as this one. How can one story stir my loins and move me to tears in a few paragraphs?! This is truly a work of art. Please write more stories like this. You have such a unique perspective and talent.