All Comments on 'The One'

LOVE IT!! PLEASE CONTINUE!

Wow,

I am at a loss for words here. I loved it!

Please continue this story. It is hot!

This is a great start - can't wait to read more!

i really need you to finish this story!!!!

i've been waiting for a long time!!!!!!!!!!!

Honeywldcat,

This is a hot beginning, you had me hooked with the line "abent-mindedly stroking a piece of silk. It made him ache to feel her hands stroking him." Then you bring the reader to a slow simmer just waiting to boil over. I can't wait to read the next part.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEEEAAAAASSSSEEEE hurry on the next chapter! I'm dying to read more!!!

glad u updated it after 4 years!!!LOL

with the first comment, that was a hot story and so glad u wrote a part two hopefully we won't have to wait another four years for part three :) lol

wow!! this is hot!!! more please.

It is hot in here? Am I sitting in a sauna?

wow, ok hot is the only word to explain this.

My title says it all... wow!

wow, one of the hottest stories i've read in a while despite there not being sex involved. If these two have so much chemistry talking to each other , can't imagine whats to come. I love the game they played in the beginning pretending to know each other. great stuff

Please don't make us wait another 3 months before we get a new chapter!!!

You are writing such an exciting story I can't wait to find out what next!!!

Where is part 2?

I don’t care for it. “Daniel” seems to be more than a bit pushy, acts like he thinks he’s “entitled”. I don’t like people like that.

Great build up... would like to read more and more.. please do continue