All Comments on 'The One'

Great build up... would like to read more and more.. please do continue

I don’t care for it. “Daniel” seems to be more than a bit pushy, acts like he thinks he’s “entitled”. I don’t like people like that.

Where is part 2?

Please don't make us wait another 3 months before we get a new chapter!!!

You are writing such an exciting story I can't wait to find out what next!!!

wow, one of the hottest stories i've read in a while despite there not being sex involved. If these two have so much chemistry talking to each other , can't imagine whats to come. I love the game they played in the beginning pretending to know each other. great stuff

My title says it all... wow!

wow, ok hot is the only word to explain this.

It is hot in here? Am I sitting in a sauna?

wow!! this is hot!!! more please.

with the first comment, that was a hot story and so glad u wrote a part two hopefully we won't have to wait another four years for part three :) lol

glad u updated it after 4 years!!!LOL

PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEEEAAAAASSSSEEEE hurry on the next chapter! I'm dying to read more!!!

Honeywldcat,

This is a hot beginning, you had me hooked with the line "abent-mindedly stroking a piece of silk. It made him ache to feel her hands stroking him." Then you bring the reader to a slow simmer just waiting to boil over. I can't wait to read the next part.

i really need you to finish this story!!!!

i've been waiting for a long time!!!!!!!!!!!

This is a great start - can't wait to read more!

Please continue this story. It is hot!

Wow,

I am at a loss for words here. I loved it!

LOVE IT!! PLEASE CONTINUE!