All Comments on 'The One Hour Escape Ch. 01'

You are a merciless tease - but an excellent writer! I am anxiously awaiting chapter 2. Katie is a winsome character. Looking forward to a romance between her and Carter - no cheap thrills, especially with her worrisome experience with her boss at the clothing store. She deserves better...

I agree with AverageBear. Lovely build up, great characterisation. Ready for part 2 to see what transpires. 5*

Roger

Very nice slow burn!

I think there was something going on in the text.

I didn't allow for enough time to read all of it.

Never shuld have taken speed reading !

A great new look at my Massage Apprentice, from a different view point. Thanks for giving me some credit in your profile, and thanks for a great read. You might actually inspire me to go back and add more chapters to my tales.