All Comments on 'The Orb Ch. 03'

by JohnnyMcThunder

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago
Awesome

good story. Hope for more chapters soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I like where the overall plot is going. The sex scenes are hot but a little out of control. A little more descriptive would be better to help get a good mental picture of exactly what all the participants are doing.

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