All Comments on 'The Order Ch. 01'

by Ikely

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forfun44forfun44about 15 years ago
EXCELLENT STORY TELLING!!

Excellent story! Bring on the next part!

Calit69Calit69about 15 years ago
Can we join?

An interesting story with lots of potential mileage. Look forward to next chapter and wondering when Owen will smell the roses. Its good

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