All Comments on 'The Order: Don and Caitlin'

Doesn’t seem to make any sense to me at all, I’m either utterly dense or having a bad day because I have no idea what The Order is meant to be. The first story detailed a girl being starved (to the extent that semen was her only recent food) then she was evicted from the organisation for having sex with a non order person. This story appears to be about a guy having a vasectomy being cuckolded when his fiancé fucks the doctor??

Ignore my rambling I’m sure plenty of people will enjoy the action part of these stories.

Best of luck with your writing.

Tess (UK)

Just more racist trash. What a waste.