All Comments on 'The Organization Pt. 02'

Very imaginative mind control. Well written. I hope you do at least one more chapter to finish this story.

J

Not one of the best so far in mind control that I've seen on here. First chapter had some angst and tension building throughout that I enjoyed, as did this, but the sex and mind control elements aren't really necessary in this. Plus, since she was FBI, she would be at least trained in how to handle these types of torture situations. Where's Sara and her mother? What's this Organization? And Will she just bow down to them so easily? Come on, this can be so much better.

This was already a good story to start with. But this mind control and brain washing scene tops it off, absolutely amazing!

Unless I missed something am puzzled why no one has queried why the detective has been missing for over 18 hours. Not her boyfriend or her colleagues. Maybe all will be explained later?

So good! Made my pussy sooooo wet and creamy!