All Comments on 'The Organization Pt. 04'

I can tell you honestly I never really liked Mary Ann and I really skipped over as much of her as I could. What I don't like is that Mary Ann just becomes "My mistress Mary Ann" to Kayce and I don't like that. Kayce and Melissa always made more sense to me. Honestly, I just skip over any major things that has to do with Mary Ann because I know it gets better eventually, but Mary Ann is that one recurring character that is just so annoying. I hate that Kayce, and Melissa, are forced to be loyal to Mary Anny.

-Zay

Melissa will be/is loyal to Kayce. Kayce is loyal to Mary Ann. How Kayce can do this to her friend is so wrong. To trick and drug her. Them injections sure are powerful to warp minds to mush even tho its shown that Kayce did feel bad about the woman Mary Ann drugged in the park but still she walked away. Is it possible to wake up from the drug? How long does the drug last for? so many questions so little answers. I'll just have to keep reading to find out.

A not so nice turn of the events. It's the writers prerogative, to give the story a completely different turn. I don't have to like it, but it is still beautifully written. Still hoping you will give it a counter swing too. I haven't forgotten how Kayce pledged to herself not to become a criminal ...

Hmm…strange turn…sad that you will turn Kayce into a criminal…