All Comments on 'The Orgy of the Pink Flesh'

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HoneyButterHoneyButterabout 14 years ago
Ewww, I love a good monster story!

Just wish the slimeballs...well the despicable rich bastards before they literally became slimeballs, suffered more for being so heinous instead of meeting their demise in such a seemingly pleasurable way more or less. Nice story.

triestetriesteabout 14 years ago
Poe would be proud . . .

This is pretty awesome. I do love a twist on an old classic. Nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Well Done

Although it's not my favorite of your stories, you certainly tapped into the times and the theme of the contest well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

Dude if anybody hates on you for writing amazing stories like this, PLEASE ignore them. I really enjoy your work and those prudes are a disgrace. Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
He is Back!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yes the Master is BACK!!!!!! FINALLLLLY. Great story. Gubled it up.Have u seen our old pal Phill???? Please tell him that we miss him A LOTTT!!!

Thanks again.

Dmitry-USA

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Extraordinary

In every sense of the word. I really enjoyed it. Best of luck in the contest!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

so when are you gonna restart your best known series? the succubus summoning?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Interesting

Unusual twist to your usual story style. It's different, but not all that bad

jonmartin22jonmartin22about 14 years ago
hey

nice one. Very eyes-wide-shut..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
AHA!

The title made me think of it instantly, the reference to Yuzna hit me even moreso, and suddenly it all turned into an awesome homage to Society! (great movie)

Fantastic, sexual, bizarre, and wonderfully executed. Great job! :)

GethelredGethelredabout 14 years ago
Wow

That was as scary as shit! good writing, but even better premise! good luck- although i did like Phill more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
DE-lish

... like strands of molten cheese...

Eww.

GriezzGriezzover 12 years ago
Interesting adaptation

I found it fascinating how you took a classic like "Masque", added elements from "Videodrome" & a few other stories, and turned it into something original; you even dropped both the original author's name AND the name of the actor most associated with him. Great touch!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Dumb.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

An even more disturbing homage to The Masque of the Red Death. And the main character's name is Edgar! Good stuff, lol.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Too Much

Too much like a snuff tale.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I find myself rereading this one over and over more than any of your other stories. If you ever make another story like this…I’d be forever greatful 😂

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