All Comments on 'The Original Sin Ch. 03'

This story please continue. Don't give up. Write write write!

Many thanks to the reader who left feedback! It was great to find a rainbow after the horrid "rain down" week. Will definitely continue the storyline. Never thought I'd be intrigued by Marguerite and Henry. However, I might preview chapters on my blogs eroftasy.blogspot.com and judithloewe.blogspot.com. And if any readers are on Kindle, heads up: A Step Into Darkness Part3 (Judith Loewe) is free for download only on 5 July PST midnight, as a thank you to readers! :)

The potential for the plot that you have begun I believe is tremendous for the creation of an involved and satisfying story. You write well and am relishing where you may take the tale. My only caution is that -- even in light of the story's nature -- the sex scenes seem bit too long, particularly for the limited dialog during them, though well written. Enjoy your craft. Horseman/R6:8

Thanks for the feedback! Really appreciate reader responses, could even be the "stick to your day job" variety. Think that's the only way to improve! Have a group of early readers for my ebooks, but sometimes wonder if that's hampered by the politeness of friendship.

If you're on Kindle or Kindle Unlimited, do have a read of my latest installment http://goo.gl/68CLJd Would dearly love your feedback :)

And I tend to preview writing on my blogs, so do visit too! They are judithloewe.blogspot.com and eroftasy.blogspot.com . Hope to connect soon!

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You are an excellent writer. The suspense of what is going to happen next is overwhelming. That coupled with the emotion you draw out of us over these unfairly hurt females shunned by society draws us in like a moth to the flame. You can compete and rank with the best on this site in those departments.

Where is the next part?

Where is the sanguine revenge going to be visited on all the raping motherfuckers????!!!!

Fuck you up your ass, bastard!

Evertying you wite gets -1* and ASSHOLE COMMENTS ON ALL YOUR SHIT!