All Comments on 'The Origins of Pippa'

Great start! We are ready to read more!

Very short, but promising. Please release more to keep the interest up.

Great start! Can’t wait to see how this goes! I’m a submissive, sometimes sissy and love how you laid the groundwork to this story.

Great start to an arousing story. You have a good narrative style. I would recommend editorial help to correct some word and sentence structure errors. But again, this was a hot story, and I want to know what the master is about to inflict upon the "boi".

Enjoying it so far. Great start, looking forward to finding out what happens next.