All Comments on 'The Outlands Ch. 01'

Oh yes please... continue. i love the world you're creating in the Outland. You have Beth and I'm sure many other young women like me primed and feeling nicely tingly for more... But then of course you've already felt the heat and wetness you've made in us so you'll know we're ready 😉😊.

Away from the heat I liked tha pacing of the story it's inventiveness and how you described the developing scene. Also it's nice that you're back to writing for us here at Literotica...

Thank You

Sara

Sara, my fond thanks to you for the beautiful note and encouragement. Indeed, I shall have another chapter posted soon. ... I did spend some time considering the world of the Outlands and I believe you will find it intriguing and fascinatingly real when we get there.

Great story.