All Comments on 'The Overly Helpful Housewife'

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NoTalentHackNoTalentHack3 months ago

I’m not into cuckolding stories, so I probably won’t read this. I just wanted to say that I absolutely love the title. Good luck with the ratings and the comments!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

How naive can someone be? It seems that you can tell her anything and that she will accept it as true.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

The author is so much smarter than women. He is a genius. Women are stupid.

That’s sarcasm for the humorless among us

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Beyond stupid! Please stop!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Wow so many tags. Good job i didn't read the story. 1☆

TuWatchuTuWatchu3 months ago

Great story. One of the best naive wife stories I’ve read. Interesting to see if hubby appreciates her new skills

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

"Good luck with the ratings and the comments!" - NoTalentHack

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If they cared about ratings and comments, they wouldn't have posted this type of story in this category. They are either a troll or a masochist...

luverlybubblyluverlybubbly3 months ago

I'm not sure if this a stupid story or is a Jane a stupid woman

DauerspitzDauerspitz3 months ago

Very funny! I really like how naive you wrote Jane and the ways you come up with explaining everything. It reminds me much of SethPerm's Claire's Career series. I liked the first half more then the second. Jane does go a bit overboard over the course of the story. Also I find the beaviour of the 18 year old neighbour hard to believe. I mean Jane is smoking hot and hes 18. It don't make much sense to me how he tries to escape her actions. But still an easy 5* for me. Thanks for writing and sharing! Looking forward to check out your other and future works!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Absolute drivel.

sermexsermex3 months ago

D-I-V-O-R-C-E-D

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Enjoyed the mix of humor and lust. Very entertaining and unique.

DavidTavani1DavidTavani13 months ago

I thought it was one of the worst stories I've read on here and the pace of the story was way too quick the wife was a little boring if I'm being honest just overall a very underwhelming story

49ers6949ers693 months ago

Good story. Pretty funny actually.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

if only, a fun story would have loved to have seen hubbys face when she told him especialy about his dad lol

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Jane needs to do some volunteer work for various locations after she confesses at her church. Do consider writing more about this lovely, naive character.

midmomimmimidmomimmi3 months ago

Started out clever and slowly went downhill. The last segment was absurdly predictable. Local hookups because she is ‘room temperature’ IQ is a great concept but this one needs a different direction than ending with the Gang Bang! This could be a nice series…?

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

What part of "erotica" don't you understand. This ain't comedy central!

lillyjones1402lillyjones14023 months ago

A great idea !!! I am sure this series will be a wonderful read.

Looking forward to the next part

Fucktoy2325Fucktoy23253 months ago

This was hilarious and super sexy and hot! It made me think of Chrissy from Three's Company! Great job!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

This was, hands down, one of the goofiest farces I've ever read. It reminds me of an old Nina Hartley movie called Debbie Duz Dishes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I really believed it... until I saw a couple of pigs fly by

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

HYSTERICAL!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Jeez guys, take a break, it is supposed to be funny and not true to life. If you don't like humor/satire, don't read it.

AnonymousAnonymous27 days ago

Sorry, I couldn't finish the first page, too stupid...the neighbor wanted her to try on clothes that he bought for his huge fat 240lb wife and she was only 140lb. yet she tried them on. So freaking stupid.

Buster2UBuster2U8 days ago

10 big blazing stars for a great story. So funny! LOL Such a Naive wife, LOL Story was so silly that a wife could be so naive, but I have certainly met some women that were almost this silly. Fun story, happy ending. Thank you for all the effort. If you don't know how to delete these rude remarks just DM me and I will be glad to explain. Thanks, Buster2U

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Trying to put all my naughty thoughts down in stories. I've never written really much before outside of my technical field. Apparently reading all the smut you guys have written has inspired me. I hope to keep improving and giving you all boners and lady boners.