All Comments on 'The Package Ch. 02'

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mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsalmost 6 years ago
Nice addition!

I was hoping Elizabeth kept one to be able to torture him while he waits.... nice chapter though!

RegretsRegretsover 5 years ago
A very pleasing fantasy.

I liked it. He really had no clue what was coming.

liz33ndliz33ndalmost 5 years ago
lost for words

this must be a pretty casual office, ice does do wonders, this is well written.

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