All Comments on 'The Pain of Forbidden Lust'

what man want to have a wife who give herself to another man.respect and trust is the backbone of marriage,she broke both with her whoring around.husband acted like a little girl,not like a male.

is so mentally disturbed to believe fucking another man who she is not in love with cannot totally destroy her husband and her marriage. She is out and out mentally ill. The only way the husband could take her back is to be so mentally ill himself that he has suicide wishs for himself.

He'll never get that picture of Vic inside you out of his mind.

Not all of your readers will enjoy the plots of your stories, but there will in general be greater enjoyment if you get an editor and catch the many little errors in your story. I guess English is not your first language and if that is true, I as a reader can make some allowances, but again, an editor would help the quality of your writing. The sentence that Ron was afraid "that I could have turned 'violet' for what she did" is an obvious example that distracts the reader from the story itself. In addition, labeling a story "Ch. 01" would be helpful for those readers who prefer to wait until the entire story is posted before reading it. I think it is obvious the story needs at least one more chapter so we can find out what happens. Nancy seems like a typical, rationalizing cheater. She also contradicts herself in her narrative. She tells her husband Ron that Vic means nothing, there is no love there, her love is only for her husband and children. Yet she was relating that love blossomed for Vic after a period of time, and furthermore, she made Vic her #1. We can't blame menopause or emotional turmoil from death of a family member or any other psychobabble excuse; she just loved the excitement of cheating, of putting one over on hubby. She did not love getting caught. How does she know Vic is not fucking others? How dare she expose her husband to STD's? He obviously got sloppy seconds -- there is no shower in the back of a BMW, although Lord knows, those cars have almost every other gadget known. So she would get home from her Friday night out and then make love with Ron (and he never noticed the creampie he was lapping up)? These seeming inconsistencies in your story might hopefully be explained in another chapter; if not, they will continue to detract from one's enjoyment of the story.

I agree with others: you need an editor. In fact, your writing has the stilted quality of a non-English speaker trying to write in English. That's a great thing regardless, but get an editor who can fix some of the plotting and work on the English idioms that do not sound quite right to a native speaker. Other way to fix it, is make the characters non-English speakers and then the off quality would make more sense.

vic is a peice of shit scumbag, you simply cut his dick off... poor acid in the wife's face and take a blow torch to her pussy... she'll remember her last fuck for the rest of her life. These stories are just such complete crap. I have to wonder how many horrible social problems sites like this cause by giving people the compeltely false sense of reality that bad things don't happen when adultry is discovered... Christ, just look at the violence and murders.. it is shit like this that causes it!

Reconciliation - nobody is that stupid to believe that angle is realistic. Revenge - most definitely is in order for both of the cheaters. Insanity plea - not sustainable or realistic. Eliminate both idiots from the gene pool - best suggestion yet!

pretty good tale.. doesn't need an ending, both sides of the LW fence can make up their own ending, one that appeals to them alone.

<p>You say that "Kanga40" had input in the story?</p>

<p>Hmmmmm.........</p>

<p>Oh well, not my cup of tea I guess. I'm not a fan of "justification" stories, and this one had everything to qualify. You know, the "Yes I cheated, I'm so sorry that I got caught, yes I gave the other guy things I denied you, but now that I'm having mental breakdown that I got caught if you don't take me back your a horrible person for breaking up the family not me, because I"m perfectly fine pretending that it never happened, darn it I'm the victim here not you, you should be feeling sorry for me because I have to deal with it now, and you need to quit feeling sorry for yourself, so be a man." story.<p>

<p>It had:</p>

<p>- A wife who was really kinda of brain dead</p>

<p>- The wife who kept saying over and over "This doesn't mean anything" as she's cheating on her husband.</p>

<p>- The wife who repeats it didn't mean anything, but in another breath talks about how she loves the other man, but its a different kind of love. That really never suggest it didn't mean anything</p>

<p>- The wife refusing and denying the request to give her husband any of the slightest details of her affair (who he is, how long she's been cheating, etc) and wants to pretend it never happened now that she's gotten caught</p>

<p>- The wife admitting that she had been giving up sexual favors her husband requested for years to her new lover of months, but doesn't see how that changes her love for her husband</p>

<p>- The wife continues to profess unbelievable love for her husband, at the same time still talking about the "fire" that her new man stokes in her when she is cheating with him</p>

<p>- Wants to use the fact they are married and have kids as grounds for him to not leave her and pretend her months of cheating with another man never happened</p>

<p>Then there is the gem of the husband talking about how he was the selfish one for leaving the house the night he found out she was cheating on him and refused to tell him anything beyond trying to make him pretend it never happened now that she had gotten caught</p>

<p>- And where by the end of the story (of what we have read up to this point) the wife (and everyone involved) is trying to help her escape her actions and I as a reader felt that everyone started to paint her as a helpless victim of her actions.</p>

<p>This story really seems to have a lot of the things that Kanga40 normally hates in a story, I guess I'm just shocked that these things are just so matter of fact in this story. The "Make the wife the victim after she's been cheating on her husband for months, while denying him sex practices she giving her lover, but darn it she's still the victim" routine that almost ever other story seems to have lately. I guess since this, based on your comment, is the only part your going to post, just kinda felt, a wrongness somehow I guess.</p>

-Risq

This isn't a very good story!!! When a married lady, with two fine daughters, and a loyal faithful hard working husband, becomes a slut who will throw it all away for a

bit of adultery, let her go. She has NO redeeming

features. There is absolutely no reason to even consider

reconciliation. Keeping the bitch around for the sake of the two daughters, or to keep the family intact, is out of the question.

I rarely comment on the author. I try to stay with the characters and comment on one or more aspects of the story. The characters belong to the author to write about them as he sees fit. It's fun to try and anticipate is there's more to a story than what you read at a glance. However, with this one, again, you seem to force a happy ending one way or the other. I have not read the "arches" series, but it is a common factor to your other stories. (*) You make the husband tell his wife she can continue to fuck her big dicked lover Tom while he tries to seduce Tom's wife Ruth and make her pregnant. How could he tell the baby is his and that he finally extracted his revenge. For Tom to accept that child as his own he has to fuck his wife too. So how would he know that it was really him who fathered the baby. No way, just as with his own unless he has both babies tested. Stupid revenge. (*) The other story where the husband takes his cheating wife back as a live-in maid and continues to fuck her. What a punishment. (*) The one where the wife leaves home without a word to the husband and takes up with another guy, to find out that she made a huge mistake and the husband takes her back. Wow, how forgiving. (*) The bracelet story is slightly different in the revenge where the other guy, Sir, was murdered by the husband, but still the marriage continued. (*) And now this. ***

Yes they all proclaim to love the husband and family more than their own life, but they cheat in a hartbeat. Isn't it great to be able to fall back into the comfort of the marriage. Real life doesn't work like that. For the rest, pretty good writing. G.Belgium

The writer is presenting us with a dilemma. I will not be able to make this into an happy ending. This story is good, because it taste real life. Regardless what he does, all will be loosers. I cannot see that this marriage can continue as happy. There will always be an heavy cloud over it, something the children will notice. She will never be able to get his trust back, and he will always remember, even if he forgives. If he divorces her, he will have his pride, but at what cost? Split home, childrens home broken up. He might find a certain happines with another woman, but still so much is lost. No - no writer can make this story end happy, just sad.

He says, "I could have turned violet for what she did."

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Final edit needed.

In real life, marriage would be over, even if they stay together. Can't see a woman who says she is devoted to her family haveing sex for four months in a car and haveing a public affair with no remorse than suddenly after being caught haveing this much guilt. Husband will never feel the same love and trust, they may stay together but it won't be fun.

You are doing fine.There are many who never want to see a cheating wife story end with anything other than her total destruction and they will never be happy with less. Please keep submitting. I would bet there are many like myself who enjoy your tales very much but don't leave a comment.

How does one make it up to someone you have cheated on? I thought this story was excellent and it is too bad you may not continue it. From the emotions displayed by the characters, a follow-up story would be fascinating.

what to write and yet he can't write his name!~!!

I believe that the word that the author meant

to digit was "violent". A little bit of understanding

is useful when reading!

The description of what was happening was perfect. The consequences are another story. I imagine that the author

is into reconciliation and it will be hard to convince

the other readers that it is justified. In fact I have

difficulty beginning from her statement that she thought

she was in love with Vic. And her further statement that she

deliberately avoid telling her husband that other girls where bringing husbands and boy friends to girls night out.

focus of a wife. She is away from her husband and she develops a relation with a creep from there who knows that she is married but don't give a shit except for his fucking ego. The husband should have walked into her workplace and found everyone involved. Surly the higher ups knew what was going on. He should have sued the company till they bleed and then got the Vic character and asked him just before he broke every bone in his body if he(Vic) was happy now that his wife was in the hospital. I would have stood the bosses and Vic right along each other and read them the riot act< That would be before I broke every bone in hs body. I would have told the other women that I would tell their husbands about their involvment and tell the husbands that they should investigate whether of not their wives cheated on them. Some husbands naturally like for their wives to get some strang cock as long as they come home and tell them the details while they jerk their drippy little dickiepoos. When asked to leave the place where my former wife worked I would but I would tell the bosses that I would see them in court and tell warn every one about what kind of a place they were. marriedwithballs@yahoo.com

The cheating wife is acting like a slut but she does regret what she did at the end. I don't know if the husband should take her back or not, I know that I certainly would not. But he has his two daughters to think about.

This story is much better paced than the author's previous efforts. Usually lucsmith takes four pages to tell his tale which creates too many opportunities for the story to bog down in unessential detail. The Pain of Forbidden Lust was written in a much tighter manner which greatly helped the pace and kept the story on track. Using an editor was a good move on the author's part.

Nothing is settled and it needs a closing.

The good news - your last story is much better. Unfortunatly, this half shows no effort to bring anything new. Its the same I cheat on him but I love him to death cliche. So lame and so incredible.

I have read all this writers "Loving Wives" stories. Not one of them has the husband being anything but a wimp in the end. In one the husband repeatedly rapes the wife and yet says he is not violent. What is his revenge? His wife leaves him to raise someone else child. Good revenge there. In all the others the husband raises other children or in some way keeps the cheating wife. All pathetic excuses of "At all costs crowd". In this story he does not finish because again they will stay together after she has betrayed him. Again no revenge just another wimp husband. I do not advocate rape or violence to your spouse. But to do nothing or even things which make your situation worse is laughable as a form of revenge. Where is the self respect in any of your male characters? They have none. I can't score you high for copping out in everyone of your stories. In this one you go to the natural conclusion by not ending it at all. You are a good writer but your stories lack in a male character that is male. Conflict does not mean surrender. You can love someone and still need to leave them with less than they started with. In each case your females profess love for the man they are cheating. In each case the man accepts that this must be so as they take them back. You might want to find out what love is, as not one of your female characters loves her husband. They are just a meal ticket.

The wife falls in love she says with another man, meets him at parties, makes a public spectacle of herself, fucks the other man, and it means nothing and she loves her husbnand. Yeah right and fucking a girl with a cigar isnt sex either! You ruined this story with this line. "Had I acted like a selfish bastard the previous evening? Had I not left the house, leaving my daughters and my wife when they all needed me the most?" Exactly how was the husband to blame for having a lying disrespecting cheating wife that commits adultry? We are all responsible for our own actions. The wife was a slut, she chose to be a slut, she had bareback sex and other types of relations with another man thereby exposing herself, her husband, and her family to a variety of risk including AIDS thereby placing them all in harms way. Is this woman a fit role model for young girls, no way in hell. To put her back with the children would smack of child abuse in the worst way. To accept her back as your wife would be impossible under the circumstances described. The fact that she had a mental breakdown is an indication of the fact that she realizes the true impact of her actions and may also indicate some mental illness that requires some type of mental health confinement. Yes this does call for retribution. The other party to the adultry needs to be sued for alienation of affection and the breakup of the marriage. Since it was a work related affair it becomes apparent that both parties should be fired from their jobs based morality. Would I have done anything different yes, kicked the asshole with his dick in my wife in the balls. When she got home she would find she was not welcome and her belongings would be beginning to pile up in the yard. Trash is trash, the wife is trash, she only deserves to be thrown away.

as always IF its a Lucsmith story... you can count on it being awful wretched moronic mindless drivel.

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Once again the wife cheats for 4 MONTHS...

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the wife has another man that she is DEEPLY emotionally attached too...

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the wife says the other guy has on her fire sexually but the still loves her husband but she cant show it...

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wont tell her husband anything about the affair while saying IT didnt mean anything...

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then wants to pretend it didnt happen... <i> "O God no. I haven't been ... doing it for that long. Believe me, what I did didn't take anything from our marriage, I love you more today than I ever loved you before. Please forgive me, and try to understand there was never any love involved in what I did." </i>

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so the husband kind of gets upset after seeing the other guy's Cock actually Fucking his wife and he walks out for the night.

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Not forever. Just 1 night.

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Result? wife cries alot claims to have nervous breakdown and Husband blames NOT the wife but Himself?

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really awful.

My enjoyment of this story -- and I really did enjoy it -- is, once again, somewhat diminished at times by your occasional clumsy sentence structure. Please learn how to employ coordinating conjunctions to join two run-on sentences. Why be content to give us, your happy fans, less than your best work?

Read his comments. They are quite good<P>

I don't buy it either. He leaves for ONE night after witnessing his wife screwing another guy and it's HIS fault for ABANDONING his family? Please. I think that was a better alternative than doing bodily harm to her.<P>

As she clearly says in her part she cheated for months. She loved the other guy. Fortunately for him he was able to actually SEE her screwing the guy. Hopefully that vision will remain seared in his brain and prevent him from taking her back.<P>

Thanks for sharing.

please stop

Shes a cheating slut who got caught ,now she realizes all she has to lose, the only thing shes sorry for is getting cuaght by hubby,she kept repeating all through her story how it hadn,t taken anything away from her husband how stupid is that ,I bet there would have been hell to pay had she opened a car door and and found him with his cock buried deep in some slut,I have no sympathy for her at all and if he stays with her may he injoy living in his own hell,I,m sure after a couple months of regular sex he will trust her again just like he always did lol ,

Great Start, are you going to finish this or what? Hell the pain has just started for her husband and her daughters and she hasn't felt anything yet except the prick of a needle and then it's off to La La land. Her husband's on his way to the hospital and her sister is watching her daughters. Strange way to end a story. Unless, I'm missing something like maybe it's 5 years later and she is still getting shots. WTF

I feel like the story's incomplete. There has to be some consequences for the wife beyond a nervous breakdown. It doesn't matter to me whether there is a reconciliation, divorce, or whatever; but the story is not yet finished.

A Well written story of a mentally challenged slut. If he lets her back in his life he is just as stupid as she is. I don't think he would want his children to be around a worthless piece of shit as her.

who was fucking another man.get real sound like some dope.writer ready to blame the husband.

This site doesn't need any more wimp endings. It is unfortunate that many of the good writers on this site insist on portraying their male protagonists as spineless wimps. Hopefully not to many women read these stories as I'm sure it would give then entirely the wrong idea about men.

Like many of Lucsmith's stories , this one is skillfully written,but depressing with no happy ending for anyone in the story.

the Ct. Yankee

what a shame... The months of the affair or should say LOVE AFFAIR will never to go away. Will hang like an anvil over their heads forever

that she isn't burned at the stake after she's horsewhipped and hung.

....he'll take the slut back so ease up on all your assumptions torch crowd-pistolpackinpete

She was able to easily rationalize the months of cheating, and feels regret...for getting caught? other? It is ok til the next fire warms her up, and then another round of cheating. All the right words can be spoken, but...

Well written story. Too bad the wife could not control her emotions with Vic and let him seduce her. Ron must of felt his heart burst when he opened the door of the BMW to see his wife making love to Vic.

A simple description of this story is INCOMPLETE!!!!!

a sissy writer,who should 've kick vic ass the start with.first thing came out of the sisy mouth did i do wrong.she fuck another man for 4 months,dumbass.it make me sick these wimpass writers alway what the cheated spouse did wrong ,nothing.

I saw this story and it sounded famaliar but for the life of me I couldn't remember it or how it ended. So, I kept reading thinking that I must have read this because I remembered the BMW and parking back by the hedge but still couldn't really remember the story or how it ended. When I finished it I realized why I couldn't remember it. The ending or should I say the lack of one made this story very forgettable. It always puzzeled me why an author would put all that work into writing a story and then not even take the time to give it a proper ending. Laziness perhaps, yes, Ron did say forgiveness with retribution but that was before he knew she had been fucking him for four months. The lack of an ending made this story very mundane and forgettable. If that was your goal, Congratulations, you succeeded.

Check your spelling, you have a lot of spelling mistakes, particularly when it has to do with tenses. And you spell the way you say things incorrectly in your head.

wrong - "I should have given any of it to Vic."

correct - I shouldn't have given any of it to Vic.

remember correct pronunciation is actually saying the nt.

I hate it when people say "I could care less" when it should be "I could not care less" a double negative which actually means I do not care at all.

Author - why did you quit on this one?

I read the disclaimer at the beginning saying there was no "real" ending to the story, implying there might be a half assed ending, so I mistakenly plunged on. There was nothing particularly original although I do think the wifes plaintive excuses, etc were probably fairly close to reality in such situations. Selfishness from either spouse has a tendency to feed insane rationalizations. It could have been a good story or at least passable however I do have a serious prejudice against authors who fail to finish what they have started, even with the disclaimer. Why would you expect someone else to pitch in and do your job. As a result of your lack of responsibility I will not on principle be reading anymore of your stories. I don't know why I bother. I have yet to have a guilty author take up the challenge and do the right thing. Oh well, back to reading the last chapter of each story first just to make sure I'm not getting suckered again. johngalt2300@yahoo.com

I made the mistake of reading this again, only to crack up over the "plaintiff cry" again...

do not give up your day job!

Author - whatever drugs you are on when you submitted this dog shit was not good for you and you need serious help. Realize that when you submit this garbage you are enabling defective gene idiots like 'size 14 no IQ" to continue to exist instead of eliminating themselves from the gene pool. They crave this type of excrement. Get some help!

UNFINISHED AND made a wimp out of husband as well as a unic, this kind of story is getting tiresome!

In most of these style stories, the husband, starts off acting like a man but in the end he becomes a wimpy, cuckold pussy.

It was a lousy wimpy effort and the stupid slut could have/should have jumped in her car and drove in front of a large cement truck and died. The kids & husband would be much better off.

Is it something in the water? Is it a lack of talent? Or is it just personal preference and lifestyle choices that have these writers praising and glorifying these Castrated Wimp Ass Cuckold husbands. Will someone please finish this story and turn this loser into a man? Please

This author uses the same theme in all his(her) stories. Trash the man, feel sorry for the bitch. Happily, doesn't appear to be writing anymore. Must of realized this trash not appreciated.

It always amazes me (and it shouldn't by now) how vehement some people get when they read a loving wives story where the husband takes the wife back. While we don't know if this one actually ended this way, these commenters are still venting their spleens on it. At least some of them use their own id's rather than just going with "anonymous." Those people I have respect for. I have none for the anonymous commenters. That said, you guys need some anger management classes....

OK, the story had potential, but went down the same path that lucsmith goes in many of his stories. The husband started out seemingly strong, but devolved into indecisiveness, finally settling on "forgiveness with retribution." Now, in all honesty, when a wife cheats on you and you had no idea what was going on, you are confused. Your emotions are in turmoil and you waffle between anger/hate, love/forgiveness, and sadness/despair/self-pity. You try to deny it is happening in one moment and then you accept the destruction of your life as you know it the next. You want to forgive, but the whole male ego thing gets in the way and you wonder what the other guy did for her that you didn't and now you are depressed and pitying yourself for not being man enough to keep your woman from straying.

For myself, finding out my wife cheated sucked. I didn't go on the warpath and use my martial arts training to mess the guy up. First of all, he was bigger than me. Second, he was also trained in the martial arts (yes, he was actually a classmate of mine). Third, you really do go to jail for assault (been there, done that, ain't doing that again). Fourth, in the end, I just decided she wasn't worth it and I moved on. I forgave her and I do still love her, but we aren't married anymore. There has to be trust and respect in a marriage and there just wasn't anymore.

But I went through the same emotional tornado that lucsmith and many other authors describe in their stories. And I won't denigrate their writing or their stories just because I don't agree with how the husband deals with it. I am happy that in this story the husband didn't go through the whole PI-video/pictures-elaborate plan to catch the cheater route. I am fairly tired of that. I like that he went there and confronted her. He should have done it sooner, but since it was going on for four months, it really didn't matter if he stopped it on the dance floor. The damage to their marriage had already been done.

I don't know anything about the thoughts or thinking process of the wife. I don't know what happens in the mind of a cheater to rationalize what they must, at some level, know is wrong.

Wow....I didn't mean to ramble on like this....anyway...later!

It doesn't feel like a whole story

I like your description of the feelings of the characters. I think you could do really well with romantic stories. You will never get good marks with cheating wives where you make them a victim too. Most successful stories on this site require that the husband be perfect and completely undeserving of an imperfect wife that could break his heart. On this site the good husband always dumps the wife and moves on with his life and meets another perfect woman, even though that does not happen much in real life. There are not that many women without baggage. They are either too young, inexperienced, or too self-centered, or they have their own baggage and past hurts to deal with.

Papajohn has the perfect storyline. Like him you would be good at writing the dialogue for the perfect husband and the new perfect woman that shows up in his life. I have to guess that he realized early that defending the cheating wife and trying for reconciliation was a lost cause. Papajohn doen's write much anymore, or at least not on this site. I think you would be perfect to continue on where he has left off.

However, it is up to you to write what you want. I am selfish in wanting more stories that follow the husband in his endeavors to survive his world being destroyed, and then making the best of it for his himself and his children...if any.

As far as writing like a professional writer...I know far less than you and cannot advise like some. I have tried and failed. Yet, I can see talent when I read and you have it.

Thank You

This is half a story

Good thing Russian connection and Nobel prized Russian fiziologist conditional reflex theory. If somebody has stronger endorphin, adrenalin, libido level increasing from the extramarital affairs she/he will work in this mood for years. A slut or a serial cheater have to take log time to cool down (extict). The cooling time may be 10-20 years or may be untill the death. To start reconcilation with an active slut or serial cheater is big mistake. The question is only who could apreciate, if this wife is a active serial cheater (she is not slut only a cheater yet)? Could the husband hope a succesfull reconcilation?

Hpoefully Ron will tke the slut back long enough to inject her wiht the AIDs virus that he smoehow obtains from friends at a drug manufacturer, the divorces her because hecannot forget the images of her with Vic's cock pumping sperm into her body; the gets great enjoyment watching her waste away to a socially transferable diease.JUSTICE DONE

the most horrible kind can throb forever. TK U MLJ LV NV

Are you going to finish the Story. Hubby needs to work through his Feelings and getting Vic back for interfering in his Marriage and either Forgiving or getting Revenge on wife as well. Personally considering the make-up of the 2 Characters I see where Vic gets taken down and wife is Forgiven but Never Forgot!

The wife developed a little fire and that made it ok in her mind to make her husband a cuckold.

My advice to Ron is to dump the cheating whore, take the kids away and leave her with nothing. If he still loves her, after the divorce eat large amounts of chocolate and find another to love.

I HATE CHEATING WIVES.

Over done descriptions and repeating of thoughts and events slow the flow.

Why did you feel the necessity of repeating, over and over again, the same story. Do you think we are not capable of understanding it the first time. On top of all this you never finished the story but left it hanging in mid air. What happened to them???? Did they ever make up again????? You are capable of much better than this. This was really rather pathetic and way beneath your talent..

"I can't live without you," "I love only you," "This means nothing to me." And, the standard bullshit that an author with no balls puts in the mouth of a cheating wife. Well, if she can't live without him, how about her putting a shotgun in her mouth, pull the trigger, proving she couldn't live without him. Adios slut.

IF YOU CAN'T FINISH A STORY THEN DON'T START IT!

After the discovery, Sweetie tells Hubby that the sex is NOT better and justifies it (in an unusual statement for a woman) by saying the sex is NOT better and that Hubby and the Bull are the same size, BUT when she is describing the sex in 'her' segment, she comments on the Bull's 'thick' pecker! Either she is trying to mollify Hubby on that point by lying (poor way to try to regain trust, and Hubby DID see Bull in 'action') or the author just forgot that detail.

Hubby also called his office the 'day after' to let them know he wouldn't be in...wouldn't that be Saturday? GirlsNiteOut is held after last working day!

I thought the 'breakdown' and hospitalization and sister-in-law added very little to this story! I also agree that telling the story from two sides is only worth the typing (and MY reading) time IF it adds something(s) of value which could NOT be provided by the other 'voice!'. Only thing I think it added in this tale was a useless & trivial (sorry, 10" fans) detail!

You DID warn everyone at the outset that there NO denouement! Too bad if some readers do not want to finish it on their own!

It amazes me that a wife who categorically says her husband is the love of her life, would allow herself to be seduced over a few months and end up fucking a jerk off in his back seat. Plus, why does it seem that when a wife has an affair she allows her new fuck toy availability to all her holes but not her husband, this is becoming a cliche in these stories. Her rationale is that she doesn't her husband to think she is a slut, but isn't a married woman who knowingly commits adultery a slut ? I sincerely doubt the wife in this story actually does love her husband to any real degree. What she seems to love is her extramarital fucking and a stable family at home.

Click Bang! Ron is now single and Needs a dry cleaner for the bed sheets. And that's how to solve the problem of a cheating spouse. It makes for a short story, but a 5 star one!!!

Wimp needs some balls, gonads, some fight almost anything but tears in the beer!

Wife needs a shrink and maybe less self pity. Bunnies do it best and often. She should be a bunny!

It is categorically IMPOSSIBLE for someone to love their spouse and cheat on them. The very act of lying to them and disrespecting them proves the point. The fact is that if she is cheating on you, she does NOT love you.

Keep smoking them cocks boy, you and the other internet hard men make us laugh our goddamn asses off - but if you pull any crazy shit with us, flash a piece, we'll take it away from you and shove it up your ass and pull the trigger til it goes 'click'

Bitch should die, but only after her children discover what a low-life she is.

B T B BRIGADES

Please give her what she deserves, lose the husband, lose the kids, lose her so-called mind, let her kill herself. Just do it! Please! She went into this wide open, disregarded her husband and kids and threw her marriage and her happy home away. Let's give her AIDS. Some kind of just retribution.

Not much use trying to be positive here as I see you haven't published for about 6 years. So I'll just say that whilst you have an editor which helps, the lack of an ending doesn't do anything for another below average tale. I won't read anymore of your works as I don't like being continually disappointed. 2**

Fucking Slut.

What is the title and subject of this story? Answer: the PAIN of forbidden lust. It's about the pain, so technically the story is complete as the couple have both experienced the pain. The pain of the daughters has also been alluded to. However, I would love it if someone would write a sequel (preferably with the author's permission), giving some REAL pain to Vic! Lol. Maybe our old friend Finish The Damn Story could help us out...

Should be the title. Because the pussy of a husband thinks he was a selfish bastard for giving trouble to his cheating wife. He should have hugged her and told her that it was OK and he was happy for her.

The writer has run out of good plots and still wants to keep writing. Bastard

really good. hope to see another chapter

Nothing else to add.

what does sorry really mean.. many times when people get caught doing something bad they immediately throw out sorry like that makes it better. OF course growing up we are taught to say sorry when we mess up but really sorry is just a 5 letter word... it doesnt change the act..

Few people say they are sorry anymore, that is an admission of guilt and gives the other person a right to claim for amends.

Not very well written. Another story about a typical woman with typical woman's bullshit denial and lies. She was a liar, cheater, and a slut. To cheat openly in front of her coworkers makes her a slut. She is not worth redeeming as a wife, although she may be worth keeping as the mother of his children until they are grown and he can cut her loose. This is the most interesting question is; how do you get rid of a cheating piece of shit without getting raped in court and coming out looking good to the family.

She wants forgiveness for her failure to honor the marriage and their vows? I wonder if this was reality, how would she have reacted to following him (her husband) to that or a parking lot and having a young beautiful woman naked on the back seat with her husband doing the exact thing? I don't usually bet, but, common sense dictates, and I do pardon the pun on that comment, she would have begun to toss his belongings out the front door. He would have had no choice but to leave or face arrest for trumped up abuse charges which sadly do occur. I don't see her the forgiving type if the roles were reversed.. or perhaps.. if she had caught him first.

she and Vic need a fatal accident, and he needs to raise his children

So where is the rest of the story, we need an ending for any of it to make any sense at all

Another stupid dipshit that doesn't know how to write a complete story. All you fucking morons that di this shit would quit posting crap like this unless you can and do finish the story. 3 stars for being a moron YAY for you.

She is as good as dead...Her mental health is damaged...She deserves it and much more...1*

I would love to a $100 for every one of these in day to day life

thanks

Have her boyfriend neutered by a gang of local thugs, and let the husbands of all her 'drinking friends' know that they knew and approved of her fucking around. Didn't like this one for just letting the adulters get off.

Color Yourself History.

Drive right past the hospital, find the rusky asshole and have him neutered. Have her served with divorce papers just as she leaves the hospital.

Why would a stupid idiot allow his wife to have a night out on the town, with the girls/ ever husband knows what guys are looking for in a tavern, women married or single, to let your wife parade her ass/in a pick/up zone is beyond ridicules, she's married with children that time is over, the family has replaced all those B/S needs or it should have.........hell, we think more and care more about our daughter we know what to expect from that type of aberrant behaviour...Illicit sex, pregnancy. Fools rule these days, it shows in there writing, there lack of any sensitive morality or respect for the viable human existence on this planet .We have become the beast......

The annony asshole has gone over the falls. This insane fuckwad is at it again.

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She likes to brag about her affairs. Because of her talking she lost job as college instructor in Helena Montana. Well that and fact she coerced one of her students

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She says she doesn't care about destruction she causes in other people's lives. Time for karma

There is one and only one reason for 'Girls' Night Out'. That is to afford wives the opportunity to cheat on their husband, marriage, and family. It provides wives with the opportunity to mock, humiliate, belittle, and disrespect their husbands and to bring shame on their children, husbands, and family and friends. It gives them the chance to trade years of selfless love and devotion for maybe a few hours of meaningless rutting. The first time your wife decides she needs a 'Girls' Night Out', remind her that none of them stood with you and shared vows with you and God to 'forsake all others'...then pack her suitcases and hand them to her as she leaves.

She had a very big reason not to cheat, a loving husband, loving children and supposedly happy family life. If it was so happy why did she cheat? The boyfriend did not have much invested and was just looking to bust a nut. People will say he knew she was married but, who really who's at fault. He can be faulted for doing it in the back of his car, her I fault for cheating not just on her husband but, her family herself and in the back of a car. The Writer didn't help, either she's sick a whore or just a plain dumb bitch and any reasoning can't be adequately explained what she did.

The only thing that comes to mind "A HARD DICK HAS NO EMOTIONS!" And "STUPID IS AS STUPID DOES".

The story is about a cheating woman not about girls night out being bad. The writer was going to have her cheating no matter what she was doing, So I guess women working is a bad thing too if you follow some of the poor logic by some of the commenters.