All Comments on 'The Parcel'

Fun story and I could see that happening with two women who haven't thought about women before the teasing of one with the new package and then the revenge of the other after what the first one did.

I really enjoyed this story and hope you write more soon. 5 stars from me.

Great but too short!! Hope that you keep writing

Just wish I'd been there to witness :)

Really good story but you should have expanded it out more. Written how they got naked together and then had Hot Sex together then it would have been really good.

Thank you so much people. This was my first ever story on here and I've been terrified that no one would like it. If I ever write another I promise it will be longer :).

A great start. As plausible as it erotic, your off to a great start. Please! develop further, so much potential here. Thank you.

I was just working out a scenario for when the vicar comes calling and you had to go and spoil it by moving the device upstairs. A great little fun tale, Ailsa. Usually I prefer stories to be much longer than this but this is one of these odd occasions when the shorter length is just right. Very enjoyable.

Very nice first effort. A little short but I'll keep an eye out for any future submissions. Good job!

Great...loved it but... don't they try each other...Only the machine?

So often Flash (or flashy, relatively short) short stories, especially 'first time' stories tread familiar ground (first day in the dorms, domineering boss, etc) and familiar sex descriptions. Congrats building a unique situation, pair of characters and eroticism in one tight package.

Look forward to seeing what you come up with next.

5 stars

Fun and original. Hopefully you will do a story for the 750 word challenge. You have the ability to do a story that is short as well as well-liked.

Found the story because you left a lovely comment on one of mine. Thank you.

I enjoyed "The Parcel" - I loved it. A sex machine to seduce a straight neighbour is such a clever idea!

5 stars.

Now explain “guys and their toys” are girls differently? …. Girls just wanna have fun, yeah cindy lauper or? ….. and here comes the advantage the ability of multiple orgasms ….. “ hey sweetie wanna come over for a ride?” Ha this sounds innocent, as in having a ride with the convertible or motorcycle BUT

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