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All Comments on 'The Park Pt. 01'

by shadwalk42

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

The gender reveal could have been written a lot better. It wasn't shocking or surprising, just confusing. Also, the story as a whole could have been written better. You barely gave any set up for the story or the character. Why should I care or stay interested when you've given me no reason to do so?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
She went right to the cops

He went right to prison. And didn't survive two days in general population before he got shanked and died. This was just stupid.

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50s something male. Always had a bi tendancy and curiousity, but this has grown stronger over the past couple of years, to the point where I'm constantly looking at cocks. I keep fantasizing about 4 men/traps/trannies tying me up and using me as an "unwilling" cum dumpster.