All Comments on 'The Party'

I was really enjoying that story, then these people turned to who she knew, I thought that was odd and didn't fit. Clearly you intended that as you showed that this was a dream. Well done, and may my disappointment someday wain.

Why do great dreams so often end this way? Loved the story but hated the ending. Throughout the story I felt my arousal growing along with the heroine's. I shared her thrill of being the only one naked but also shared her disappointment when she woke up unsatisfied. It was a wonderfully erotic story that I wanted to go on, and on, and on, with potentially numerous more forfeits. (Yeah I'm naughty.) Despite the ending it was a great read, thank you.

Your story was worth five stars until page three. It's a shame you could not think of a good, appropriate ending. This is the classic "Help. I've fallen and I can't [finish the story]" ending.

Her nipples were "just north" of her panties? Either she is wearing some big-ass granny panties, or boy, those breasts are hanging low.

A wonderfully engaging story, well written. That being said, you fell into the lazy-ending-pit. Why do so many stories need a "happily ever after" ending?!?

I'd have enjoyed, much more, her orgasmic humiliation, and possibly further forfeits, and maybe a *tumble* with Mickey and/or the designated driver, once home....

Like the others, Page 3 took my head out of the story.

Just my never to be humble opinion.

Thanx for sharing your story!

Ideally, all the sites that used to host these would still be around and readily searched, so you wouldn't have to take the time to republish these, but since we don't live in that ideal world, thank you for taking the time.

Damn and it was going so good, I wanted more. I hope she is like me and dreams can continue another night.