by Johnevie
Well, THAT was different! I am liking this roller coaster that our hero has found himself on. Hot sex with interesting characters. What's not to like?
Oh what to do ? Yeah i would of done the same. Jon make us proud. I started at ch 3, I'm going back for 1 and 2. Hey what flavor will the ice cream be.
It is a good story, but the writing? That is something that should be published. I have a suspicion you are published. This isn't porn hobby quality, it is novelist quality.
Your story is very enjoyable. I am looking forward to parts 5 and beyond!