All Comments on 'The Party Planner Ch. 04'

by Johnevie

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HamsterHamsterover 5 years ago
Ummmmm...

Well, THAT was different! I am liking this roller coaster that our hero has found himself on. Hot sex with interesting characters. What's not to like?

maddictmaddictover 5 years ago
Yummm

Oh what to do ? Yeah i would of done the same. Jon make us proud. I started at ch 3, I'm going back for 1 and 2. Hey what flavor will the ice cream be.

roschoroschoover 5 years ago
Wow

It is a good story, but the writing? That is something that should be published. I have a suspicion you are published. This isn't porn hobby quality, it is novelist quality.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice!

Your story is very enjoyable. I am looking forward to parts 5 and beyond!

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