All Comments on 'The Path to Happiness'

Great story so far. Please publish the next chapter. XX. Susan.

very nice

Please more! Love the story!

I really liked your story.

I couldn't stop reading, please continue Brenda's story

proceed with the story..I'd love to see where things go from here.

I enjoyed reading this story and look forward to reading the next chapter but please read the story yourself or have someone read it for you before you post it you can then correct the mistakes, please don't beat yourself up over it cause this is only constructive, I gave it five stars

I would have given 5 stars but for all the spelling mistakes.

Needs more shouldn't end, well written likedm it

Great beginning. Can't wait to read the rest of the story.

so far, Great. Keep going

Is good. <3

Liked the story.

Intriguing story in the beginning jot sure which way it was going to go!

Nice story, I enjoyed.

As far as the writing goes...a lot of spelling errors. A good editor would go a long way in helping to polish it.

Nice story so far.