All Comments on 'The Penetration Puzzle'

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AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Brilliant, detailed story. I hope you write more in a similar setting.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Great story, I really enjoyed your writing.

Onihime11Onihime112 months ago

Nice just nice

VintageLiteroticaVintageLiterotica2 months ago

This is one of your best imo, 5/5!

HeartfeltmanHeartfeltman2 months ago

Like a handful of mainstream writers, this author is someone I follow closely and anxiously await the latest.

With the precision of an engineer, the stories move at an effective pace. I am very happy with this latest installment. My preference is for longer, more involved pieces, but then I'm kinda greedy.

onlyshecumsonlyshecums2 months ago

Great story. Pacing is on point. Characters are detailed enough to get an idea about them without wasting 3 pages of backstory.

YogmaYogma2 months ago

Great story. Very inventive.

sho1223sho12232 months ago

Hope you found an editor, if not I'm still open!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

one of my fave authors

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