All Comments on 'The Pensione'

Enjoyed your story and writing style, lrft me wanting more

You have a good command of the language. Will look forward to hearing more of your fantasies.

I appreciate you reading my first story. You support means a lot :)

This quick tale is well written, and although it is very descriptive, there is a lot left unwritten, making the readers figure out what happens next.

Multiple starts for the first attempt!

I do hope you continue to write..

You're very encouraging and so glad you want to hear more. I might have to go back to that Florentine pensione and find our girl again.

I'm feeling more confident about sharing more fantasies now KeepItHot, thanks :)

Impressed with your command of the language, your command of your writing, and of course your command of your imagination. This story can stand alone, or you could build on it. My vote ? Build on it !

Thanks Klitomatic, I agree this story could go much further. Chance encounter in the hall? A late-night liaison or even a relationship over the course of the three months.

The details and the pace of discovery were perfectly unfolded. I felt like I was the one observing.

Lovely to hear from you by NaughtySouthernGent, and thrilled you liked reading (and watching).

Nice story of catching her private moment

I'm pleased you enjoyed this small insight into her story :)