All Comments on 'The Perfect Beginning Ch. 19'

by KimberlyGirl

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acercheracercher5 months ago

I've been reading this hugely ambitious (and extended) story with appreciation, and feel as if this chapter is a worthy recap of all the author's ideas. As a minor quibble, I don't think the sci-fi framing device is necessary (unless it is simply a device to handle the role reversal age play without running afoul of Literotica's 18+ requirement). The author has clearly thought deeply about the implications of gender roles and conditioning in a FLR and this story is an impressive undertaking.

KimberlyGirlKimberlyGirl5 months agoAuthor

Thank you, Acercher! I appreciate that you took the time to share something positive.

As for your quibble, i'll just say, "Yes."

KimberlyGirlKimberlyGirl5 months agoAuthor

One other thing, Acercher:

I really enjoyed writing this chapter. Not only does it recap ideas, as you indicated, to me there is something both interesting and especially pervy about turning the sex education conversation between mother and daughter on its head. Love that daughter is helping through her sexual evolution. The idea that they are both excited and aroused throughout the conversation is compelling to me too.

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