All Comments on 'The Perils of Susan Gibbons Ch. 04'

brill story and especialy the ending

Oh for fucks sakes.

You could have made a good story. The emotional, financial and legal consequences of her quitting would have been a welcome change of pace from the usual bullshit that is spewed on this site….but no, you just had to write the SAME GODDAMN STORY EVERYONE ELSE DOES!

Read any number of blackmail stories, they’re all the same and not one of them has the wife challenging them by saying: “I quit”.

I guess it had to end sometime. At least there was a happy ending.

Nice, always like a Disney ending. Susan deserved a good time after all she went through. Good writing and sexy.

The whole story is gibberish, the story is broken, he said that the father died of a heart attack, and was later alive, he said that Susan had never had anal sex, but in the previous story she had already done so. I give it a zero rating, horrible story.