All Comments on 'The Photoshoot'

I had a good cum reading your story.

Oh look another cheating whore. All these fucks rubbing their pud about cheating. Story could have been hot with her playing with herself, with the dick play. People have some fucked up fantasies.

The amount of people who are shocked, SHOCKED!, that there are porn stories on a porn story website; it's truly astonishing.

Great story. We thought it was very erotic. Hope you write more.

I think Dave could needs a shoot outside . A little bribe about video's could go a long way in a exhibitionist franticly . She may even find she likes it . She could easy Gary into being her escort were as he could hold the video camera in more and more public places .

O wait that would be my fantasy .

Never mind .

awesome.could not help but cum

Enjoyed the story. Thanks for your writing.

Nice little story, a bit lacking in polish, like changing tense "tried to talk myself down" and lazy skipped dialog "and said so to Dave". But I enjoyed enough to read through

How utterly idiotic.

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